This song Doesn't Rhyme. A song I found.

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chad22

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This is actually a pretty good song. Click the link to have a listen. This Song Doesn't Rhyme When on the page click the audio player to play the song.

Here's the lyrics.



I have to admit --

While writing this song,

I struggled to find words that rhyme.

It´s almost as if

My talent was gone.

I couldn't find words that would rhyme.


The rhymes were all close --

But none of them true!

Iv´e given up hope.

I feel like a fool!

What bugs me the most

Is this song doesn't rhyme!


Had I gone to Berklee,

Would this song be working?

Would that have helped this song to rhyme?

Had I gone and bought us

A brand-new thesaurus --

Would that have helped find words that rhyme?


I'm out of my depth.

I'm grasping at straws.

I just can't accept

I'm at such a loss.

Iv´e got nothing left!

I can't make this song rhyme!


Maybe it just doesn't matter.

Maybe it's gonna be fine.

Maybe the world will say, Eh -- close enough!

No -- it's—´ still gonna bug me! Augh!!!


I just have to face it.

Give in to frustration.

I can't make this stupid song rhyme!

You'll just have to like it!

I've never rewrite it!

It´s pointless! I can't make it rhyme!


You get what you get,

So please don't complain!

It bugs me to death,

But one fact remains --

Though Iv´e done my best?

This song just doesn't rhyme!

Chad
 
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   / This song Doesn't Rhyme. A song I found.
  • Thread Starter
#3  
Some lyrics contain Iambic Pentameter in their verse and some don't.

That's weird. I'm seeing the Iambic too. It wasn't there when I posted it. I'll see about fixing the lyrics.

Chad
 
   / This song Doesn't Rhyme. A song I found.
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There we go. I've edited the lyrics to get rid of the Iambic Pentameter.

Chad
 
 
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