Looks good Bill. You want to watch your thermosiphon hoses though. That upper hose has a little droop in it(goes down then up). This will really slow down the coolant flow, especially at higher loads. Your first symptom of slow flow under load will be noise at the coolant outlet. That will be the coolant in the head boiling because the heat in the head is not being carried away fast enough.. Best to have the upper coolant line go upward as soon as possible, at as steep an angle as is possible...
The doghouse on the ST generator heads is pretty cheesy to start with. I would highly reccomend scrapping it and just bolting on a steel utility box and a solid state diode rectifyer. Here is a pic of how I did mine with a 8"X8"X4" box(I think). I added filter caps to the bridge rectifyer output to clean up the rectifier output to the field. This gives a much better AC output waveform, but it also upps the output voltage a little. I had a fairly long line from my genset to my house panel, so a little higher voltage at the generator was a good thing for me. This box was big enough to do this as well as add breakers on the two 120V legs and add an hour meter powered off of the field. The solid state rectifyer and hourmeter are commonly available at
surpluscenter.com.