Bob999
Platinum Member
<font color="red"> Lets say a person you know and believe you can trust showed up at your door with a hundred dollar bill in his hand.
He told you that you have two choices. Either take it or he will go over to the neighbors and give it to him. Your choice. No strings attached.
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Bill (Henro),
It seems to me there are "strings attached". You want an implement in return for your money. It is a fact of life that the same product is sold for different prices--you only have to drive down a stretch of highway and see that gasoline prices differ between different stations. I still don't think you are going to improve things with the message as written. Is your intent to change the way the dealer does business?? I suspect that is not achievable. On the other hand, if your objective is to give the owner one last chance for your business I think you should write a different letter--one that says you want to do business with him but are not willing to pay a premium price to do it. A short and simple letter!!
Bob
He told you that you have two choices. Either take it or he will go over to the neighbors and give it to him. Your choice. No strings attached.
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Bill (Henro),
It seems to me there are "strings attached". You want an implement in return for your money. It is a fact of life that the same product is sold for different prices--you only have to drive down a stretch of highway and see that gasoline prices differ between different stations. I still don't think you are going to improve things with the message as written. Is your intent to change the way the dealer does business?? I suspect that is not achievable. On the other hand, if your objective is to give the owner one last chance for your business I think you should write a different letter--one that says you want to do business with him but are not willing to pay a premium price to do it. A short and simple letter!!
Bob