@MTGreen Nice job!
I like the suggestions from
@Carl_NH.
I think that they sound like great "ounce of prevention" suggestions. In my (limited) experience, "if it can go wrong it will go wrong". I would have put foam on the vault roof before covering it with soil, but that's me, so I will be interested to see how the temperature holds in the vault. I would insulate the pipes and pump control switch, as they would freeze before the tank.
I am sure that your pressure control system will be fine and I wouldn't sweat it. We have used similar systems my entire life with no issues.
Just curious: Why the paint stripes on the tires?
All the best,
Peter